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Big black eys

Big black eys!

It was a very nice and hot summer,and i was 12 yers old.
My sister and i was in the wood and pick mushrooms.
I said too my sister - Ebba, go home now,i don't need your help.
She nod and run away.
I look arond me, when i sow that nowon exept me was in the wood i run to the attic.
The attic was on a very frightful hous.I think i was the only one how know the building.
When i come to the attic i lookt aronde agen but i don't see anyone.
I walk into the attic, and when i had been ther almost two minutes i heard somthing.
It was behind a big box, when the box was gone i look on the floor, but i don't saw anyting.
When i would go home so would i take my mushrooms. But they wear gone, it onli was a tiny little mushroom whit a bite on it.

When i was home so was my mom very angry on me. She smack me on my cheek and said:
- Wher are your sister?
I said - I don't know, when i was in the wood i said to her to go home.
- But she did't come! Said mom.
I start to cry bekus it's hurt when my mom smack me.
Mom said to me - go to the wood and find your sister. Now!
I lookt at mom and said - Yes.

It was dark in the wood. And i was so sceard.
I heard a diffrent noice from the brook.
I run to the brook and lookt doun in the whater.I saw blood on the tree on the grund, on everyting.
The diffrent noice come from a wolf, i was so sceard but i might come home whitout my sister.
I was foced to continue looking after my sister.
When the wolf was gone i run the fast done to the brook.
I saw my little sister float past in the water, she wa dead.
I wade out in the water and tok my sister in my arms and took her home.

Wen i come home i ran in to the hous.I skream:
- Mom! She is dead!
- What?! Said mom.
She ran to me and took Ebba from me.
She scream so loud,i got pain in my ears.
- Go out i will never see you agin! She was red of ters in hers eys.

I look at my mom and said - If you don't will see my agin you don't!!
I run to the door whit ters poaring out for my cheek.

When i wake up i was in my attic.I remeber that i froze befor that i sleap.
But when i wake i don't froze anymor, i feal somting on my stomach.
I raise me and look on my stomach, I saw a big white rat.
The rat sleep so sweet and i was so sceard that i might say aniting.
I lookt at the rat, it was actually sweet!

After a long time the rat wake up, it look at me whit his big black eys!
I hesitate but i caresses the rat.
I took up the rat in my arms, it was a boy.
The rat was so friendly and nice, it yust look at me whit big black eys.
I had one little bit cracker in my pocket. I break it in two part.
I give the big whit rat one part and eat the other part.
When the rat was finished i took he in my arms and said - I love you ,Derry.

Every day i wet out in the wood to pick vegetable,nuts,mushroms,flower,berry and fruit, We drink water from the brook.
I and Derry was almoust best friends now.He accepted me and i accepted he!
But on day i and Derry was in the wood both of us, he was on my shoulder.

I met a boy, the boy was dirty and smell awful, he reached out his hand to me.He said - hello.
- Hello. I anser him, I start to walk away.
But he take my arm and said - Wait! can i hold your rat?
- No! i said.
I start to ran but the boy ran after me.
He said - My father is a hunter, if i can't hold the rat i gossip.
I said - Okej but only a minute.
He took Derry, and start to ran.
I run after him and scream - No give him to me! Please!
The boy run in to a garden.
He shout dady,dady look waht i'v got!

The fater took Derry and lookt at him, he said - What a dirty rat, i gad'e shoot him right now!
He aim at Derry , Derry was on the lawn,when the hunter shoot i jump in front of derry and got the shot in my back. My last opinion was - Derry i Love you, Run .. save your self.
Derry crawl in to my ear an said - I know that you love me Estelle, I know!

The End!

Skriven av: Estelle - 12 år.

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